''Fragment II'' Rewrit; or, ''Poetic Augmentation''

Splashing, thrashing, wildly bashing
rages the rolling sea
like half-tortured Poseidon drowned
in waves of misery!

In tempestuous, dark dead of night,
a vessel from afar
plows through by dim, faint, speckled glow
of north's Polaris star.




Poetry by Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-01-16 at 16:00

Tags Sea  Polaris  Poseidon 

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice rhythm and rhyme! Like the context also! Bravo!
2021-01-16