A modern day Villanelle about love. Nothing really just an expose of a heart.


Another Place and Another Time by M.A.Meddings

This fire that burned within two hearts
A purest love that might have been
But for circumstances line, another place and another time

Yet was love true ever beating
An incendiary flame that could not be
A fire that burned within two hearts

Your love for me such brief moment
A dream that came on these cyber waves
But for circumstances line, another place and another time

And yet in springtime I will wonder
If gentle love died easily
A Fire that burned within two hearts

Had a need been snuffed completely
By a flame so fierce it could not be
But for circumstances line another place and another time

Yet the love of one heart lingers always
And another heart beats longingly
A fire that burned within two hearts
But for circumstances line, another place and another time





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Written on 2006-06-12 at 13:11

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Hi there mike...lovely piece ..you are so wonderful..amazing!!!love this madly!!!
...kissess
2006-06-14


Lourdes
Sad sad piece , still so much beauty.. I don't know if I believe in other places and times..
Is it only a sentence formed as a wish to soothe the cold handshake of truth and reality? Because I believe there are honest emotions on display here..My young heart`s telling you to go get her if that is what you want. On the other hand, the beauty is sometimes preserved better in memory. A beautiful write M.
2006-06-12



I remember this beautiful poem... It is so tenderly sad, if I may say so.
2006-06-12


Kathy Lockhart
Oh, the sadness of the constrainst of another place, another time. Can love understand this? Do hearts mend because of it? It is just so. Love continues throughout this poem even from another place and another time, even when beating a lone. ~~kathy
2006-06-12


Malin Johansson
Yes love comes and goes but it will always stay in ones heart in one way or another... Love needs to come in a perfect timing to hold forever...
Very nice poem here Mike!!!
Sunny Regards from Sweden
2006-06-12