my chilly valentine

 

this winter landscape—leafless and deciduous,

gray barked, white with snow—

 

affords, through excurrent and decurrent

branches, views of hills

 

unseen from april to october.

from the sunny porch

 

i see the paths i walk with familiarity,

but never see, but now, 

 

from a distance—distance and

perspective—and though cold seeps

 

through my layers of clothing

i am heartened, if not warmed, by the view,

 

and glad i brave the cold, and glad 

you brave the cold.

 

 

 

 

 

 





Poetry by jim The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-02-14 at 13:19

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Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done Jim.Happy Valentines Day
2021-02-14


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Amazing how winter provides insights and views masked by the other three season’s stuff. That’s why I enjoy winter and it’s starkness as you obviously do as does your lover here. Very well presented with a fine sense of minimal words, Jim thanks!
2021-02-14


dee quirke
Very good enjoyed it
2021-02-14