Triolet exercise. (Triolets are hard!)


Clouded Altruism

Four days of rain without a break!
Sweet Lord in Heaven, what a mess;
My garden has become a lake.
Four days of rain without a break?
Must be some weather god’s mistake.
Poor roses, under such duress!
Four days of rain without a break;
Sweet Lord in Heaven, what a mess!




Poetry by Lady Courtaire
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Written on 2021-05-28 at 19:09

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Ducks
A lovely Triolet (and I agree, they are hard!).

I can see clearly your poor garden. What a tragic image. Hoping for clear skies soon!
2021-05-28


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
You’ve handled the form brilliantly!
2021-05-28