On commuting in the city (a tanka)


Petty Vengeance

Sharp-suited elbows
Jab into my ribs beneath
Bleak subway lighting.
I hope their stock schemes fall flat
And their lunches get stolen.



Poetry by Lady Courtaire
Read 379 times
star mini Editors' choice
Written on 2023-11-21 at 15:05

Tags Tanka  Petty  Daydreams 

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poem has been chosen to be featured on the home page of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2024-01-29


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
A poem I can relate too all too well. Deliciously petty. I love it!
2023-11-22


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is glorious! It made me laugh aloud.
2023-11-21


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Perfect, as a Tanka, and best of all delightful poem - speaking as someone who abhors commuting.
2023-11-21


Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
ha ha, super
2023-11-21


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
A ++
2023-11-21