Wash day

My mum said that we came from a long line of washing,
Generations of scrubbers and squeezers, soap and sweat,
Not ashamed to hang their clean linen in a public place.

My mum removed stubborn stains with a carbolic cake,
Then I used the same pink slab to spruce up my black-marbled skin,
'Don't forget to do behind your ears', she would bellow.

My mum swore by Persil, a dandruff-white laundry powder,
She liked the two babies that appeared on the packet,
Said one of them reminded her of me when I was that age.

My mum let me help her peg out the weekly washing,
Allowing me to separate socks and hoist up tea towels,
Pretending to flag a patriotic message to the fleet.

Now, when I take the washing to my ancestral line,
I raise my lavender and coconut scented bed sheets
And wait for the billowing wind to take me back to mum.




Poetry by Christopher Fernie The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-06-17 at 21:12

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Steven Riddle
That is so incredibly lovely—a hard lived life that comes to the present as a realistic but softer memory—made beautiful not by the harshness of the work, but by the love of the worker. Your mum would be extremely proud, overjoyed, I should think, to be remembered in such a lovely, touching way. Thank you!
2021-06-20


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
What a charming piece. I appreciate nostalgia - because I'm getting old. Beautiful memories borne on the wind; they will live forever.
2021-06-18