July 28th,2022

A strange day
packed with longing
immense longing
which at one point of time
looked like
would engulf me completely
and it did for a few moments
making me succumb to it
to this deep longing
within me
which makes me sad and happy
at the same time.
Sad that i feel
happy that i feel.



Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-07-28 at 21:23

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the last two lines. You've written about longing well.
2022-08-03


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, being aware of feelings, valuing them and going with their vibes, is often most rewarding. A good write.
Allen
2022-07-28