NO NEW BREATH

"Can you see Fred, Rita?"
Were the only words spoken.


The caring nurse said them
Whilst I was consumed
by a torrent of tears
My eyes shed with shame.

My frame was rocked by
That final breath she took
As she left my World.
I should have been strong,
My spiritual understanding
Should have held my hand
In just the way I had
mentally held hers...
tucked beneath the crisp
White hospital sheets.

Instead I had stroked
Her smooth cool forehead.
Such gentle stroking
Hopefully imparting peace
And helping remove fear.
Here was the fated comma
Preceding 'goodbye' full stop.

These were her life's
Final moments, predicted
By the doctor who had called
And advised me to come.

I hung on that doctor's words,
And dared to whisper
She should not fear death
She should just 'let go'
Her struggle, her past,
The pains she'd endured,
Her life long story
Now come to an end...
A new story just beginning.

She must have heard me.
She must have listened,
Even fully understood,
For there was no drama,
Nothing to mark the moment
Save for no new breath
following the last.

 

© griffonner 2022





Poetry by Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-12-14 at 12:11

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Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh my, Allen
This is so beautifuuly done as i was in that last moment.
my lifelong regret is that i was not with my grandmom when she breathed her last. No one could see i was so afraid and i still regret -not being there but just outside. if it is of some consolation, you are a braveheart who was with her sweetheart- making her feel safe, as always. Thank you for this poem.
2022-12-16


Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Sorry for your lose, This reminded me as I read
Of a lose, There's a multitude of thoughts
Running through my head. Thanks for posting.
Regards Alan.
2022-12-15


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A very affecting poem, Allen.
2022-12-14


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes. The sad mystery of death, and how we cope with it. To me this poem came in one flow, and all the better for that. And I liked the ending. As always Allen a thoughtful and moving piece.
2022-12-14