Evolution Perchance

 

 

The log was cut the winter of last year

Then stacked with others at the rear

Of the garden shed and left to dry 

Fuel and warmth against a wintry sky

 

Cut by a younger more robust man

Memory whispers saw in hand

Who today is less the man he was

Due to time and nature’s flaws

 

Gathering these seasoned logs

Gasping an arduous monologue 

As with this desiccated heavy wood

Am I too evolving  as I should. 

 

 





Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-03-04 at 00:13

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D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
The poem works for me, by its brevity and the reflective tone; and it manages to do notwithstanding the AA BB rhyme. A good one Jo.
2023-03-04


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
True enough, and well said.
2023-03-04