Just me wondering and foolin around.


Lovee

i am not a poet
i know
i am just someone
who is loved
and who loves.

And this
unfathomable, overflowing love
is like an ocean,
never ending but palpable
all the way.
Its scary at times
but i take it easy
and see it as pouring rain
still dewdrops
cascading waterfall
playful river stream
and a meandering river
at times
but always water.

i guess we are the islands
on the Indian Ocean.



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Written on 2023-10-25 at 16:07

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
First of all, love the ending couplet.

Second of all, the mere fact that you love and are loved, and deign to share that in verse makes you a poet.

And lastly, you got a typo there at waterfall.
2023-10-25