This was written in the wake of the loss of a dear one.


Passing

Unobtrusively,
a feather fell
upon a tranquil pond.
There was no
loss of flight,
no shifting of the sand
but somehow
waters moved,
a reed trembled,
and shores touched.




Poetry by Pat
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Written on 2024-07-24 at 23:12

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shells
A beautiful emotive piece.
2024-07-25


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Amazing
2024-07-25


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Such a great work
So well expressed
Welcome to poetbay pat
ken d (willams)
2024-07-25


Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
yes quietude and such silence.
2024-07-25


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I enjoy your quiet, reflective words.
2024-07-25

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