LIFE IN A NEW SUN ( pt1 orbis )

Nighttime has finally arrived
First since we crashed
Lucky to be alive

Orange moon shining down
With translucent colours
Shining on the ground

The air smells fresh and green
On our planet orbis
Which sounds stranger then it seems

For this is no flat earth world
A virtual paradise land
Within a waterworld

This strange world
When viewed from space
Looks strangely crafted interlaced

Like two cheese quavers Entwined
In a lovers loving embrace
Into a pinecone sort of shape

Spinning round a silver sun
With three moons that act as one
Three lost astronauts virtual paradise





Poetry by Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2024-08-13 at 05:35

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
This reminds me of Haruki Muakami's novel where there are two m oons. This poem strikes the reader as being a little illusory.... at first glance. But then....
Blessings, Allen
2024-08-14