Written by 'Frustrated' of PoetBay




SOME BEDSIDE MANNER!

 

I have been to see the doctor once again.
Just a check-up in reality, but once more
I leave frustrated and clear in my mind
That this man just doesn't like me, or,
Does he not listen to any of his patients?
Sitting back inside my car to await
My anger to dissipate, I watch a couple
Exit from his hallowed doorway, in turmoil
Clearly having quite a vociferous row,
And I can't help wondering if they too
Have just been treated to his strange
Bedside manner - where the computer screen
Is more important than the patient who
Sits facing the right side of his head,
And to whom he just doesn't listen.

It would have been nice had he said,

Looking at my notes, "I'm sorry to see

You've been in hospital once again."

But I conclude such niceties are alien,

Nested, insular, behind his cluttered desk.

 

 

© Griffonner 2024





Poetry by Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2024-10-29 at 11:23

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Doctors are often assholes
2024-11-19


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations! Your poem has been chosen to be featured on our home page by a fellow member of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2024-11-18


MIRZA AHMER BEG The PoetBay support member heart!
Gone are the days when we were humans
2024-10-31


Uncle Meridian The PoetBay support member heart!
Ugh, hard no for me on this clinician. Competence does not preclude the personal gentling civilizing touches to which most of us are accustomed, and which most of us expect. Not mutually exclusive, not a zero-sum game.
2024-10-29


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
It's sad, but, in some fields, the personal characteristics which bring one success don't include those which enable one to do his or her job effectively. Medicine, with its very demanding educational requirements, is one of those fields. Politics, as we've all seen, is another.
2024-10-29


KYREUS of Sweden The PoetBay support member heart!
Hard-ish. No real escape.
2024-10-29