if you look


in the silence

behind my word-illusions

you will find me




Haiku by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-07-09 at 14:59

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efflux
I wonder if this isn't what happens when I don't see the poem I am reading. Don't even know I am reading at all. It's not art anymore.
2006-09-02


Julie Zerbe
Yes, this makes a lot of sense. There will always be those who don't bother to look. Your poem makes its point.
2006-07-14


English War Veteran aged 98
Yes I think I can see you too!! goooey!!!
2006-07-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
wow this is a beautiful expressive Haiku and i guess the person sees you so clearly
rgds mike
2006-07-09


Arti
The true poet hides behind his words, and lets others feel his feelings for him. Thereby, he is richer and his emotions deeper, simply because of the number of people feeling them.
((hugs))
2006-07-09