Audacious woman, how did you aspire to outshine the sun? 

Though it's aloof and very distant, all we are we owe to it. 

Its warmth keeps us alive and, with its brilliance, it dispells

The gloom.  On the other hand, you're near to me and most

Engaging. Since you are, you've led me to lose track of every

Other thing, including that life-giving orb. It's fair to say that,

To these eyes, you shine with greater brilliance than the sun.