yet another write that i decided to put on this site and its already on my other poetry site. this was also another one most people liked on elites so i hope you do too.


Leave and Forget

I'll never forget
Never forget this place that changed me
Brought me misery
And hurt

I want to leave
Leave behind those nights I cried
And would leave mascara on the sheets
That stay as remains of my sadness

I want to close every door
All the doors that hold these memories
Shut them
And hope my mind can get rid of these memories

I wish I could be back
In the place where sadness could hardly exist
Where doors are open holding happy memories
And forget this all



Poetry by Brenna
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Written on 2005-08-23 at 04:14

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a nice poem, though again i feel like you are wandering repeating thoughts, especially with the second verse and the word leave. happiness will come, there is time yet.
2005-08-23


Commentally Ill
who is this going around and putting c.i. at the bottom of their messages? :P busted. sorry, now on to the poem.

certainly well written, i like it. :)
2005-08-23


epohonci
(leaves and forgets)...... well, not really.

when are you going to post some fresh poetry?

...............please? :) fodder..............

c.i.
2005-08-23


blackestdaze
(felt like choking as i read this-although i'm not sure there is-ever-a place where all doors are open holding happy memories and sadness hardly exists. i think it was there all along, it's just now, giving up on the idea of ever hoping it gets better.)
2005-08-23