What you are

You find flaws where there's only perfection to see
You smell failure where there's only victory to gain
You sense misery where there's only happiness around you
You look at yourself, surrounded in darkness because the light has blinded you
You are, in every way... human



Poetry by Janne
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Written on 2006-07-14 at 20:40

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Arti
Beautiful. I love this unique way of looking at humans.
Welcome to the bay!
((hugs))
2006-07-15


Zachary P. B.
We are so faulted as human beings. Blind and bitter. But the poet is a special human that can see while others gripe and moan. The poet is gifted with eyes and with words. Loved it.
2006-07-14


Malin Johansson
This is so beautiful Janne
I love the line:
* You sense misery when there's only happiness around you!!
STOR KRAM:))
2006-07-14