I am a very hyper-active person
who sometimes forgets
that not everbody wants someone
in their face all the time,
and I think that due to my hyperactivity
I may have stuffed things up big time.

~liz~


Hope a good thing is not ruined.

I am full-on and over-the-top
I get too excited about things,
but now,
I think i've gone too far,
and ruined something
good that started happening.

For I do not have much patience
as I find it hard [for things] to wait,
I can only hope, that now,
it is only my imagination over-reacting,
and that I have not ruin things
through my in-your-face stupidity.

.....maybe for an apology it is not too late.

16/07/06




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-07-16 at 09:10

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Mr.Mist
just loved that last line...
".....maybe for an apology it is not too late."
...remember, its never to late to say sorry...but its not shure you have "hurt" someone...hyperactivity is somethink i dont think anyone should say sorry for..if someone cant stand the hyperactivity, then maybe that person is`nt the one...but hyper or not...I still think youre sweet...

BigHugz and Love

-Thomas
2006-07-18


tony
you know, if you dont mind me saying so, we, as writers, as poets, should not forget the angle of elusiveness, of clever correlation and implication, which indeed goes along with our being a type of 'author'...your writing, here, can be defined with one word: obvious.

perhaps, a bit more imagination, or irrationalization, is in store. there is more than one way to say something, you understand...

-tony
2006-07-16


Christian Ward
sorry for the additional 'has'
2006-07-16


Christian Ward
This is a good poem, Liz but the title has sounds a little awkward, surely you meant to say

'Hope a good thing isn't ruined' ?
2006-07-16