I lay and watched the house martins return to the nests under the eaves of my house in Berkshire a gentle nostalgic love poem in Villanelle form


And Became A Secret Love by M.A.Meddings

As I lay and watched the martins last night relaxed in my garden chair
Set quietly amongst the dead head roses of a month since past
It was then, that my trailed Cinquefoil neglect hit me

For I fell in love on the aftermath of my autumn days
With a princess whose gentle beauty I will ne'er forget
As I lay and watched the martins last night relaxed in my garden chair

But the birds were a little late this year
Turning in tight circles on late July Berkshire skies
It was then, that my trailed Cinquefoil neglect hit me

For in the intervening months of a year
I found in my heart a love that became a friendship
As I lay and watched the martins last night relaxed in my garden chair

Then I knew the love I had, did not die
But instead became a beautiful adoration of a friend
It was then, that my trailed Cinquefoil neglect hit me

And on late the summer cooling breezes
My heart came home with migrant birds and became my secret love
As I lay and watched the martins last night relaxed in my garden chair
It was then, that my trailed Cinquefoil neglect hit me











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Written on 2006-07-25 at 11:00

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Kathy Lockhart
How can it be that your poetry just keeps getting better when in my mind I have adored each one. This one is a story in of itself. So much revealed here about your love and its far reaching abilities to penentrate your thoughts and feeling. I adore the pictures you paint in this beautiful garden where you comtemplate and reflect. This is a fav. xx kathy
2006-07-25


Malin Johansson
A very hearshaking poem here,it sounds to me that the poem is battleing between friendship and secret love...
Regards cyber daugther
2006-07-25



A poem on the same line as the one about the moths. Very delicate, hero!
2006-07-25