A hug

You ask me to hug you
And so I do
You ask me to never let go
I tell you the whole world could blow
Before I do so

Connected to each other
And love to one another

I never let go, yet I feel free
Afraid that if I would
You would let go of me...




Poetry by Peter
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Written on 2006-07-25 at 13:44

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Parnika
Always thought a hug is a better sign of affection than a kiss...what do you think?
This one sounds like mine called Hugs..only I was longing for one and you got one!! hehe
2006-10-06


Me_Pia
hugs don't you just love them ^^
2006-09-11


Veld Cooper
I never let go, yet I feel free
Afraid that if I would
You would let go of me...

This is so clever, and so true. Nice, Peter!
2006-08-22


Amanda K
cute and funny. I just loved it , Peter.

Take care,
2006-08-21


Natalie
*hug* I don't wanna let go :) <3
2006-07-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
I know the feeling sometimes its hard to let go because you think the other wouldnt give a damn but this is a beautiful poemand so very true

but i am sure she doesnt want to let go of you either rgds mike
2006-07-25