Written in tears..


May she be better than me


I will let you go now my beloved
Let you leave my heart on the ground
I never managed to be a home for you
May her actions overshadow mine

May she succeed

May she love you better
May she heal all the cuts that I've made
May she meet you half the way,
on those roads I constantly let you walk alone

May she always stand by you

May she never forget how beautiful you are
and always speak your tongue
May she hold you until you fall asleep

But when you slumber in the shadows..

May you whisper my name



Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-02-28 at 22:51

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anguisette
envy and beauty always intertwine, always.
2008-10-17


Teala
Wow, this is so romantic and chilling...
2006-03-15


Teala
Wow, this is so romantic and chilling...
2006-03-15


Foolish
Oh my God... This is so beautiful. I feel so home in this poem. I just want to cry..
2006-03-14


Feiyn
Your poem was very beautiful and I adore your last line.

" But when you slumber in the shadows... may you whisper my name."
2006-03-10


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
WOW!
you are such an unselfish person.
I love this poem.
Liz.
2006-03-07


Oskar
Wow... why hasn't these texts appeared on "poeter.se"? Your English is really good, and your way to express feelings in eng-poems are almost as good as in the Swedish ones.. ;)
2006-03-01


Hasani
this is nice. Very selfless and strong :-). I like.
2006-03-01


Peter
so beautiful ^^
I love it!!!
*bookmark*
2006-02-28


AngryAngel
Oh I wanna cry!
This is so beautiful!
2006-02-28