The miracle of life.......


My son

helpless
like a little bird fallen from it`s nest
I`ll lightly rub his back
and hold him to my chest

small and fragile
unaware
I`ll teach him all the ways
to enjoy life
taste the fruits
and play happily throghout the days

and though I know
someday he`ll grow
to old to play with dad
he will always remember
his younger days
and all the fun we had





Poetry by pettyodd
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Written on 2006-07-31 at 22:09

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Amanda K
how sweet and gentle are the thoughts here and the feeling behind. bookmarked of course.
2007-02-26


Almaz
This beauuutiful poem totally gave me goosepimples.. It feels like u've been as gentle, putting these words together, as the care for your son.. really moving!
I hope I will have the chance to write something like this, someday... :)

How old is he now?
2006-11-10


sania
beautiful. the relationship depicted is quite emotional. i'm still a kid myself, so can't say anything more. but it must be really beautiful to see thy children grow.
2006-10-21


dija
i could feel the love of yours 4 your son show this poem to him and im sure he'll love u more than he did before!
An excellent text full of love!!!
2006-09-19



One day, I too shall have my own son -
this has inspired me.... thanks
2006-08-02