cont. of series on phobias.


Homichlophobia- Fear of fog

Driving home late one night
The air was..sultry..
The heat was rising from the streets
Yet something chilled me to the bones

It happened in such an instant, I barely
Even had time to notice
And suddenly..
Yes suddenly..
I was
Engulfed
Entangled
The Fog

All around me
Choking my
Very existence
Consuming me
My soul
My thoughts
Every image darkened
But it's not-so-sweet surrender
Falling into darkness
Save me..




Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-02 at 10:45

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Troll
have you ever seen the movie the fog? lol, i never thought the fog was all that scary, unless i'm alone in it.

this series is a good one... if you don't have a fear of people one already, you should add it to the list of what you're going to write.
2006-08-03


Arti
Eerie...chilling...lonesome write.. Good job!
2006-08-02


Kathy Lockhart
a bit of a spooky write. The feeling of being consumed! : > kathy
2006-08-02


Dan Cederholm
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I take this with a little bit of humor!!!

Homichlophobia hehehe but I know

It could be very scarry!!!

Sincerely Dan . . . And dont get panic!!!


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2006-08-02