This is a repost, but I was thinking of the ocean tonight, and thought I would share with the newcomers;)


The Ocean..

The Ocean
I long for the sea to nip at my feet

to wrap me up in it's cool arms

I feel these ancient memories,

tearing at my core

I long to near the water

evermore

I long for the place

where the

winds and the tide tear at the shore

but in the twilight of my dreams...

the fire rages on






Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-02 at 10:53

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single
I like this one, sweet, nice..
2006-08-06


Troll
indeed the fire rages... and not even an ocean can drown it.... an excellent write, teala!

~troll
2006-08-03


Arti
Am I included in the newcomers too??!! I dont remember finding this one...
Love the images, especially the concluding lines...
"where the

winds and the tide tear at the shore

but in the twilight of my dreams...

the fire rages on"
Thanks for reposting!
((hugs))
2006-08-02


Kathy Lockhart
Oh, Teala, glad you reposted! This is worth a read again and again. The imagery is vivid! :) kathy
2006-08-02


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
This is an awesome poem!i specially love those line"I feel these ancient memories,
tearing at my core"
2006-08-02


Dan Cederholm
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Hey there Teala!!!

A wonderful poem here!!!

Sincerely Dan

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2006-08-02