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Zemmiphobia- Fear of the great mole rat.

Shifty eyes

Teeth so yellow

Whiskers Flexing

Ready for the kill

Fur covered in

lice and dirt

Wirey tail

Get away!

Vile creature

Perhaps spawned,

From the very depths of hell

Twitching, anticipating

Left to your devices

You sneak away

Avoiding my cast down stare...



Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-04 at 09:28

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wolfthepoet
pretty damn good i must say, manipulating a phobia, is a cash crop in narrative writting. great work
2006-08-11


Arti
I think I have this one... I'm scared to death of rats, mice, .... even roaches!!!
2006-08-04


Kathy Lockhart
oh, gosh, I think I must have Zemmiphobia for I am frightened and full of anxiety at the thought of such a thing. Great images!!! Some so great I had to close my eyes to read this. Yikes! :) kathy
2006-08-04


Zachary P. B.
"Ready for the kill"

hehe rats are scary but not vicious. Poor person who has this phobia. =( I love these little narrative poems, this series is quite good.

Z
2006-08-04