This was a reply from my wife after posting the following poem on the website.


Clever reply!

I think your pic is cute
u r such a beut.

If you were mine,
all I do is keep you up til 9.

I like the colour of your hair.
There is none to compare.

You might think this is lame,
but If I dont have you, I will go insane!

So please come on a date with me...
Im the best, as you will see.

The only word is "yes"
For me to take of your dress!

You wil not beleive your luck
Im the best thing you will ever ........!


Reply..................
Re:

Dear Duncun
you sound like a pumpkin

where is you pic?
do you have a big d_g?

if you are the best,
I will need to put you through a test

If you want me to be yours
you better go home and learn your chores

and if you keep me up till 9
I won't complain... that just fine

But when you take of my dress
Then you better show me that you are the best!

So if you don't have me and go insane
Well then you are the only one to blame..

So were will I meet you for our date
And careful..you better not be late

Then I'll wait for your reply
Beware..if you are gay I am not a guy

Your wife (nice joke honey)




Poetry by Duncan D
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Written on 2006-08-11 at 11:53

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Rob Graber
This is pretty funny! "Luck" alone, we now see, was only half the poem; "Clever reply" completes the work, just like good life partners complete each other. ("You complete me"--from the movie Jerry McGuire?)
2006-08-11


Malin Johansson
This was funny and entertaining to read...:)
RGDS
2006-08-11