Vampiric inspirations..


Dark Seductress

I wait for dusk
in dark shelter
Surrounded by velvet
my daylight tomb
Each night, a new lover
but one grows wary
I hunger for.. a companion

Searching these
Paris Streets
Street lights
The only sunshine I know
So many men pass me by
Tipping their hats
Bidding me a fair evening
If they only knew..

Seductress! Enchantress!
Vampire..

And then, when all hope
Seems to be lost..
I find him
Hair, black as midnight
Eyes, piercing sea-foam green
I must take him

Approaching..ever so swiftly
Locking eyes
I see no fear, but yearning
No words are spoken
As I lead him away
And press then his body..
Into the nearest wall
Our hands..intangled
Bodies, beseaching..something
Intangible..something unknown
With kisses..that grow more
Feverish by the second
I realise it is time
My dark lips..meet
His tender, pale neck
His blood, so powerful..
Ravishing through my veins
A silent lucidity, capuring my heart
Breathing, tasting, letting him in
I know his every secret now,
His very soul
And still yet, he drinks of me
Refreshed
A bond that cannot be broken
A dark tide of wonder eclipses
His eyes
As we enbark on a journey
Of eternity...



Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-19 at 12:07

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The Nxt LeveL
I definately enjoyed this. It has a subtle intensity and imagery that lingers. It kind of makes you want to be her next victim.
2007-01-12


FrancescaLuca
I absolutely loved this one -it is breathing poetry.. I can completely connect with what you're writing, my feelings exactly..
x Francesca
2006-12-20


BlueyedSoul
WOW Teala...this is incredible...it is passionate and seductive...sexy and dark....you had me hanging on every word! Wonderfully written and expressed.

~Blue
2006-11-22


R.K.Singh
You are simply superb here: reaching the soul through the body-- something I have always believed in.
R K
2006-08-22


Zachary P. B.
a wonderful poem, strange but eerily attracting... to be alone like a vampire would be hell, this was an amazng write, teala.

z
2006-08-19


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
hey salut teala... i really like this tale and how you tell it... wonderful work... thanks for sharing :f xx
2006-08-19


Kathy Lockhart
Wow! Fantastic Images! Love this one, Teala. One of your best! bookmarked! kathy
2006-08-19


Malin Johansson
Wow this one is just so great!!!
So imagery and so damn good!!!
*applause*
Regards :)
2006-08-19


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Great work Teala!You really got into the spirit of a vampire, you think and act like one in this poem(can it be that you remembered a memory from a past life?)he he he
2006-08-19


Dan Cederholm
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Oh Teala I get so inspired of this poem!
So I write a poem as a comment!!!
BRAVO but so dark my friend!!!

"In the darkest nigth, no one can se me

I go out as dark as the nigth I hunt You

I am the hunter you are the hunted, so

beware of the Vampire in the darkest nigth

you cant winn the battle and you cant get

out of sigth . . .

I want your blood in my veins, so if you

dont be afraid you can be one of us

who live out in the dark and the hunt is

not for free . . ."

REGADS Dan

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2006-08-19