Ah, vampiric lust, no less...Once bitten, twice shy.


Lust..


One moment of lust..

And now nightfall has become..

Her one solitude..



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2006-08-23 at 00:04

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munir mezyed
wow , this is really amzing, very awesome poem ..short and very witty
Munir mezyed
2006-12-21


Wangdi Gyalpo
You have very aptly mentioned the bitter consequence in the form of 5-7-5. Just a small suggestion... there should be three dots (...) as an ellipses. Isn't it?
2006-11-29


Kathy Lockhart
oooh so dark and so poignant! Love it! kathy
2006-08-23



A moment of lust ....a moment to bite!!!!good haiku!!!!kissess
2006-08-23