No Hay Banda
It's all recorded


Sixteen reasons why I do not love you


The way you close your eyes
_when we say goodbye

The way you touch my hand
_when you lie


and the song stops


make you wonder doesn't it

about the fourteen missing reasons

well they are all there

just move ahead in time

it's a shame you're stuck like this

and why don't you move


why aren't you moving ?



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-09-02 at 01:03

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salem
u r realy so great
it's so nice poem
2006-11-19


Zachary P. B.
wow wow wow.. first time reading this, better lat than never, i guess, but it was amazing.

why aren't you moving?

i guess we all want to be proven wrong about "sixteen things" sometimes...
z
2006-10-18



Sometimes I feel that you're expressing me better than myself
2006-09-02


Zainab
i really adored the heading
Rate:4
2006-09-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there this is tellinhg it straight just as it should be well done for you determination rgds mike
2006-09-02


Nugget
this was completely unexpected and wonderful. thank you for it. i loved the twist and i had to read it about four times. the title is heartbreaking.
2006-09-02


Kathy Lockhart
That's my girl! I love this! It has GRIT! xxxxx
mother
2006-09-02


Michael G
nice.. a good write indeed
2006-09-02


Judy T Lloyd
The music stopped and that was indeed a powerful line. It summed it up so well.
2006-09-02


Daybreaker
Hey, this was rather good!

Interesting write. And it's all there ' since it's recorded.





SILENCIO!
2006-09-02