ummm yea this is a short version of a letter i wrote to my ex but havent given to him yet. so just let me know what you think.


Things I've left unsaid

I'm not sure why I'm writing to you,
Maybe it's because there have been things,
That I left unsaid,
Some feelings and thoughts,
You didn't know I had,
I looked at our pictures,
And they brought back old memories,
Thoughts and feelings too,
I started to rip some of the photos up,
Realizing I couldn't get rid of them all,
I kept some,
There was no way I could do it,
Throw away all those old memories,
Whether they were good or bad,
And all those thoughts and feelings along with the memories,
I just couldn't,
Like I said,
I'm not sure why I'm writing,
But I think I know why now,
I want you to know,
That I'm not going to forget,
Or let go of everything we've been through,
And I'm not quite sure what you think now,
But I'm happy,
Because now at least you know




Words by Brenna
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Written on 2005-09-11 at 22:41

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
Hmm well I've noticed people on this site don't like to say much in comments which would personally annoy me if I didn't get more than a few sentences.

you have written in a poem, yet you have not made any comments hardly on people's work! perhaps taking the time out to visit others, you might then get some interesting thoughts on your work.
2005-09-13