Haiku


stranger




put your word between

my head and my head between

your dying silence





Haiku by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-11-14 at 21:28

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey lourdes
this is nice and very clever but i wondered what was coming at the end
rgds mike
2006-11-15


English War Veteran aged 98
"hiaku!"

bless you !!

Are you taking something for that ?!!!
2006-11-14


Kathy Lockhart
so much sadness here Daughters. My heart hurts. This is a very emotive hiaku. Here is my word that I place so warmly in your heart and your head: Love. Mother K
2006-11-14