keith nunes
marvellous poem. you've a beautiful moment in a relationship. well done
2006-09-07

Will
You should enjoy it, it's a special place the BAY.

Excellent Write!!!

Welcome
2006-09-07

zeeshan
oops!!!!! i mistook you as a male
so many sorriessssssssssssss !!!
dear lady your love really shines through this poem , well not to be asked but i'll really like to know , whether do you really love someone, or was it just a feeling that came out through this poem , pardon me if i went too personal........

regrds zee.
2006-09-07

zeeshan
woah man , this is one as your first deserves 10 outa 10 , u know what i liked this poem also because the first poem i wrote was also abt love, well i hope u post many more....
al the best, keep up the good work......


rgrds zee
2006-09-07

Zoya Zaidi
This, Jane, is a faboulous poem!
If you had not said, it is your first,I would never have believed it!
Its rhyme and rhthym is just perfect!

Welcome to the bay!

**Hugs**
Love, Zoya
2006-09-07