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These Moments in Time

These thoughts stir in my mind,
As the passing of time goes,
What do we make of it?,
Life,
And time,
How do we spend each minute,
Of every hour,
And every hour of every day?,
Does time ever really stop,
and leave us in the moment?,
Is there something,
That tries to send us a message?,
Or a warning?,
Or the fact that we need to remember,
A detail so little,
That could mean so much later,
These moments in time,
Are what we should pay attention to,
For they might mean something,
To us later



Poetry by Brenna
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Written on 2005-09-17 at 16:40

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Ray
It seems you have been going thru a lot at your young age.There is hope, search and you shall find. Great poem, loved it.
2005-10-01


Commentally Ill
how do i spend the minutes, let's see, well i spent two minutes standing in front of the microwave watching my food cook, while i could've been outside smelling the roses. and i spent... (too tired to do the math, but on any regular given day, 600 minutes) at work, when i could have been playing with my nephews and nieces, spending time with my husband, writing poetry, or getting stoned. such a waste...

:D

life, we don't make much of it. it shapes up to be what it is, and we make the best of it that we can, or we don't...
2005-09-17