strike me down (or not)

your sounds at night
you breathing, moving and knowing
your tickelings around my arms and legs

we share warmth, scence and thoughts
your emotions bends over mine
the dark disappear while the shiverings takes shape
it seeks into the shadows, comes into life

my ego is almost out of control
it makes me kiss you
touch you
lie to you
calling you love-related words. stupid words. kliché
while my fingers seeks and discover
while your lips follow mine
while we undress each other

I can't feel you
Shut up



Poetry by els
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 01:06

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Camillaa
Oj, vilken styrka :D
riktigt bra
/ C *
2006-09-17


Lourdes
This write , licking its own confusion , reminds me of modern japanese poetry ,, maybe also due to your dim lightening like a lantern shading each word and sentence just right . You do this so well Els , I am envious of your ways .
2006-09-17


Saga
Your desire reasonates in this piece!!
2006-09-17