mysterious girl

mysterious girl
walking down the street
she looks into the air
God cnow what she sees
apart from the world
as she flots into the wind
you can see shes tierd of the storm she grows within
it starts to rain
you can still see her tears
you can tell by the hair hanging over her face
that thers an empty room
a space
emagen the fall
the naked trees
its like her world
nothing to see
she has nothing to be



Poetry by indine
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Written on 2005-09-18 at 16:07

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
it's a good piece, but could do with some tidying up with the errors that are in there.
2005-09-18


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
very nice poem as ive mentionned to you... theres a lonely air and sad feeling through it reaching me... very well done... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-09-18


epohonci
let the emptiness be filled, with love.
2005-09-18


eight-feet ii
How very mysteriously sad.
2005-09-18