pass through


THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER



W ________ I

O

D _________ N








I PRESENT TO YOU A MOON

---before the moon---

I PRESENT TO YOU A TREE

---before the tree---

I PRESENT TO YOU

------ you ------



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-09-18 at 00:35

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Window - the wind's eye...
2006-09-18


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
A clever poem and thoughtful acrostic very well done

but
do i see ref to Woden in there may be not
if so onew of his ravens is here

its name is 'thought' well done

rgds mike
2006-09-18


Judy T Lloyd
Hmmh this is a form that I have not seen before but that is the beauty of clicking on something you have never tried. Very creative.
2006-09-18


Kathy Lockhart
very visual poem. I have been studying it, admiring it, enjoying it. In my eye I see creation as I pass through my own vision into the picture you have inspired. Love this daughters. Mother xxxxxxx
2006-09-18


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Well I am glad to meet my self!Thanks for presenting me to my self! ;) *lol*
2006-09-18