This is some kind of a fanfiction story that I wrote about the famous boyband a1. It's not true, only my own imagination. I hope you like it.
I know that there's some problems with the text, I guess you'll notice yourself, but otherwise it's fine.
Mark hung up the phone and sat down with the others. A little silence came. Then Ben broke the big silence.
- Are we going to a karaoke party tonight? He asked.
- Yes, we'll be at Kim's place. You could thank Kim's friend Jeto for the party cause it was her idea.
- Is this Jeto coming? Paul asked.
- Yeah, she'll be the only one except from us who'll come. None of Kim's other friends could come.
- Oh, that's too bad, but then it's just us and Kim....and her friend...what was the name again? Christian said.
- Jeto, her name is Jeto! Mark replied.
- I bet it's a nickname! Ben said while standing up.
- Maybe! Where are you going? Mark asked.
- I'm going home making myself ready for the night.
- But it's not until 8pm. It's only 1pm now.
- Yeah I know, but there's something I have to do first.
- Okay! But remember...Kim's flat at 8pm! Don't forget it!
- We won't forget it! Ben, Paul and Christian said in chorus.
Short story by Eagle85
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Written on 2005-09-20 at 20:45
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Thank you for loving me (Part 1)
It was Friday morning and Jeto had to get up early to go to work. She hated to stand up early, but it was Friday so it was her last day before her weekend. She hoped that she and her friend Kimberly could do something together this weekend. Maybe arrange a party or something. What Jeto didn't know is that Kim was friends with a1, the popular boyband. Kim knew that Jeto was together with Ronny from another unknown band called Rocky. They've been together for 5 months by now. Jeto also had a dog called Benny. He was 1 year old and he loved his "mummy", but Kim always said to herself that Ronny did not. The relationship between Jeto and Ronny was starting to fade out and sometimes he was even beating her. Jeto was a very big a1 fan, but Ronny didn't allow any posters of them or any cds. He didn't even live with her, but still he was very bossy. Maybe that's because he's so much older than Jeto. He's 28 years old and she's 17. Ronny knew that Jeto thought very nice about Ben in a1. Jeto didn't know that Ronny was cheating on her with over thousands of girls on his wild promotion tour with the band. He slept with his fans. All her friends called her Jeto, but her real name was Merethe. Merethe Louise was her real name, but she hated it. Jeto came to her work with her bag on her shoulder. She worked in a music store and of course she loved her work very much, but sometimes she really needed a brake. It was in the middle of September so it was kinda windy outside and very cold. I'm glad I'm inside in this horrible weather she thought to herself while sighing. In the beginning it wasn't so many costumers so she took a call over to Kim.Mark hung up the phone and sat down with the others. A little silence came. Then Ben broke the big silence.
- Are we going to a karaoke party tonight? He asked.
- Yes, we'll be at Kim's place. You could thank Kim's friend Jeto for the party cause it was her idea.
- Is this Jeto coming? Paul asked.
- Yeah, she'll be the only one except from us who'll come. None of Kim's other friends could come.
- Oh, that's too bad, but then it's just us and Kim....and her friend...what was the name again? Christian said.
- Jeto, her name is Jeto! Mark replied.
- I bet it's a nickname! Ben said while standing up.
- Maybe! Where are you going? Mark asked.
- I'm going home making myself ready for the night.
- But it's not until 8pm. It's only 1pm now.
- Yeah I know, but there's something I have to do first.
- Okay! But remember...Kim's flat at 8pm! Don't forget it!
- We won't forget it! Ben, Paul and Christian said in chorus.
Short story by Eagle85
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Written on 2005-09-20 at 20:45
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