An Acrostic seeing her beauty


What Do I See by M.A.Meddings an entry to Zainabs what do I see challenge

Memories of her
Invade my every thought
Keeping me entranced
Enchanted and in love

Mesmerised by her words
Enthralled by her smile
Defeated by her beauty
Delicately she moves my heart
Into pounding spasms until
Nervously I succumb
Gradually to the beguile of her
Soft and gentle spell




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-30 at 22:00

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J. E.
You are truly a master when it comes to love poetry. You always keep clean of clichés, it's amazing! I never manage to write about love the brilliant way you do. I admire you, Mike. Really. Keep these wonders coming!

Sincerely,
J. E.
2006-10-02



This is you hero! And a romantic hero is not imaginable without a lady in his heart!
2006-10-01


Zainab
I SEE! ^^
Thats very beautiful
If you are describing your wife
I'm jealous , just kiding
Brilliant work
Rate:5
2006-10-01


Zoya Zaidi
Even your name spells romance Mike!
Superbly done!
(((hugs)))
love,
Zoya
2006-10-01


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is delicious!
2006-10-01


Coolaaron88
Mike, you always long for the beauty of a young woman and in my book, that is alright with me : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-09-30


keith nunes
clever as all hell and as touching as they come - well done
2006-09-30


Kathy Lockhart
This is so beautifully done. The acrostic tells me that she is a part of you. : ) kathy
2006-09-30