You let go

I wont let go
I wont drop that low
Keep hold of me
I'll let you see
You'll come out alive
You'll survive
Just don't let go of my hand
And then you won't land
Please try to stay
If you let go then forty feet your body will lay
Just another couple of minutes
I'll go past my limits
Oh no you're slipping
Your clothes are ripping
I can't hold on any longer
I'm not that much stronger
I wished help would come immediately
I scream your name repeatedly
Please someone
Where's the help there is none
Oh no
You let go....





Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-10-03 at 02:03

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keith nunes
great piece of writing ariel. it has tension and longing and a powerful finish!
2006-10-03