Please don't

Please don't hold my hand

When I know you're just going to let go

Please don't hold me close

When I know we're going to drift apart

Please don't wipe away my tears

When I know you're going to make me cry

Please don't tell me you love me

When I know it's my heart you will break

Please don't make me rebuild a life that once was

When I know it's just going to fall apart......




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2007-01-16 at 00:31

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Rob Graber
This is well conceived and executed; your development as a poet is impressive!
Do note that, just as you have it in line 6, "you're" (rather than "your") is needed in line 2.
2007-01-16