Mr Butterfly


Mr Butterfly
why haven't you flown off to better weather
Why have you stayed in this chill and ice
lying on the ground, you have paid your price

Beautiful colors of green and blue
Your wings are so beautiful
Yes, so are all of you
Why didn't you fly away

As I turn around I see something else on the ground
another butterfly that looks like rubies and gold
Is this why you stuck around Mr Butterfly
Is this for which was worth to die

I'm sorry I can't put you next to her
I can't bring you together for your final rest
You died for love Mr Butterfly
to be with her on the other side

And I died too Mr Butterfly
But he survived
He didn't die for me
He didn't even cry



Words by Natalie
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Written on 2006-10-03 at 22:17

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Ropawil
Did you mean me when you wrote this?
I think you got really close
Really descriptive of a lost love.
Regards

Rob
2009-01-31


Dee Daffodil
I especially like the last two lines the most. I like the theme of this poem. Nicely done.
Hugs,
Dee
2008-10-18


Mitzi
wonderful poem! :D
2006-10-18


Daghan
I really like it Natalie.This is so lovely and cute poem.This poem reflects your affectionate and pretty character.
Lovely...
2006-10-05


Peter
funny and cute with a pinch of sorrow, love it honey
<3
peter
2006-10-04


Amanda K
Nath,
That was kool. I loved how you addressed that Mr here.

Keep it up,
2006-10-04


Sabrina
Naaaw, Natalie, so beautiful! :)

Hugs,
Sabrina
2006-10-04


AngryAngel
Wonderful :)
2006-10-03


keith nunes
beautiful poem! well written and with plenty of emotion and feeling. good stuff
2006-10-03