This is for my boyfriend, he tried to kill himself I dont know why but when I found out all I could do is cry. And I just found it out today:((


Please Stop

You start to take pills
You arms instantly get chills
Looking at a picture of your soon to be wife
She's everything she's your life
But yet you still take pill by pill
Till there all done
Life is no more fun
You start to feel sick
Your heart is almost at its last tick
Then you think of the one you love
And hope you'll see her up above
You gently touch her picture as if it's her skin
Then you feel a stabbing in your heart like a giant pin
You fall to the ground
Where you were found
Your love comes in and finds you where you're at your last breath
The upcoming death
She gets to her knees
She says, "please baby don't die please baby stop"
She cared for him so much
She always loved his gentle touch
Why did he do this?
Now she'll never again get to feel his kiss
He loved her but yet he tried to die
All she could do is cry
Now he's with her to stay
But everyday there's still a fear of getting taken away




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-10-06 at 05:10

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Zoya Zaidi
Very emotional and right from the heart.

Well done Ariel!

I hope he is OK now?

(((hugs))))

Love,
Zoya
2006-10-06