© Erik Brickman 2005


Within, without



Within your eyes
I find my soul
Say you will never
Give it back

Inside your mouth
Are my longing
And cannot be tasted
By anyone but me

Behind your hand
I feel my life
Sheltered for ever
From the noisy world

Outside the love
I have for you
I cannot live
There, no air exist.



Poetry by Erik Brickman
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Written on 2005-09-26 at 14:28

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a good piece, though some of the flow is hindered here in the translation.

are my longing - would read and flow better as is my longing.

exist at the end would be better as exists.
2005-09-26