Breathless

He had a snorkel on as he berated
Me for being home late. His
Car, his money, my girlfriend.
He had the snorkel in his hands
When they buried him - breathless




Poetry by loomer
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Written on 2006-10-12 at 12:51

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BlueyedSoul
i shall have to ponder this one further...it has indeed left my breathless, gasp!
~blue

*interesting write i must say*
2006-10-12


keith nunes
so cool! great piece man
2006-10-12