Just messing around really.


A Rat Out Of Hell.

I once saw a rat as fat as a cat
Sitting astride a dirty great bat
He flew through the air with the greatest of ease
With his shaggy brown coat and his knobbly knees
He'd soar over houses and down through the streets
Then under the street lamps doing marvelous feats
But just before dawn it all came to an end
When he failed to jump off on a very sharp bend
Over a wall and down into a well
And now he is known as the rat out of hell




Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2006-10-13 at 11:09

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Veld Cooper
Your humour is just the greatest, Hugh, a great laugh from me!
Veld
2006-10-15


BlueyedSoul
lol oh my you did make me laugh graham lol
great end to that nasty creature yick lol

~Blue
2006-10-14


wee2souls
oh!!! what a write!!
laughed all the way through!!
pictured this in my mind!! lol!!
great humor..love it:)))
thanku
cindy
2006-10-13


Zoya Zaidi
Hi, Graham!
So nice to have you back. Only this morning I wrote on a poem you posted along with India on Cp, that I was missing you on Pb.
And here you are!
Did You get my message? or this is telepathy!
What ever, Iam so happy!
HOW ARE YOU?
(((Hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2006-10-13


Kathy Lockhart
funny stuff! I would hate to drink from that well! Would it be called a Rat Hell Well or perhaps Hell Rat Well? Whatever, I steering clear of it. Lots of great amusing images. : D
2006-10-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a very ammusing and entertaining write graham well done rgds mike
2006-10-13