autumn

Bare naked shy trees
in the autumn stand bullied
bidding bye to leaves.



Haiku by sania
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Written on 2006-10-14 at 10:12

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Bella_Laluna
Autumn... a hard word to write =)
never really learn it... =)

Its my favorite season of the year
the colors just gott to love it

Lovely write
Laluna
2006-10-30


Zoya Zaidi
I like the bidding good-bye to leaves bit!
love,
Zoya
2006-10-14


Bob
Haikus are always fun to write and this one is nice, but perhaps lacking a bit in mystery or an element of surprise in the last line. But that is just me.
2006-10-14