As these petals fall

One by one touching the ground
Making the slightest of a sound
Falling, falling through the air
Gently touching the ground each one with care
The softest of touch
One by one at a time not too much
Twisting and in twining
Two by two lining
Making a path
Potent wrath
As these petals fall
This tree stands tall




Poetry by Ariel Bennett
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Written on 2006-10-19 at 02:38

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Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
You are really talented! Really great imagery here, I can even hear the whispering sounds of falling petals.
2006-10-20


Mitzi
great poem!! i love it!
2006-10-19