It's really more a song than a poem though, about to very special persons in my life.


Time has come to move on

It's time for us to move on now my friend,
our road has met an end, it really did.
You know I'd stay forever if I could,
please don't cry, let's remember all the good.
Love has left a trace of what has been,
nothing more to say, we tried
so many years.
We tried so hard, but we were meant to fall.
You knew I fought, but you never saw me crawl,
you never saw me crawl.

Find your peace, it's time you know.
Side by side in dreams we'll go.
I have to leave, the ship of ours has sailed.
And I've got no answers, don't ask how,
it's just time for us to move on now,
move on now.

You see your self reflecting in my tears,
in dreams rewinding all the years
we won't forget.
Now I write a song for us and leave it here,
of the two of us and the love we couldn't bear.

Let's find peace, it's time you know.
Side by side in dreams we'll go.
I have to leave, the ship of ours has sailed.
And I've got no answers, don't ask how,
it's just time for us to move on now,
move on now.

I hope you'll remember all that I told you,
know I'll miss you so much.
Remember the places, the years and the traces.
Wish you will remember all this too,
will remember all this too.

Let's find peace, it's time you know.
Side by side in dreams we'll go.
I have to leave, the ship of ours has sailed.
And I've got no answers, don't ask how,
it's just time for us to move on now,
move on now.



Poetry by Bowjonozz
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Written on 2005-09-30 at 20:20

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Good! I like this poem. I think if you had added a little flesh to the skeleton of this poem, it would have got the charm far greater than it has now to offer. Maybe, it would gleam like the joy you are holding onto your heart of good spirit.

I would love to hear what you are yourself just now thinking of skills in art, and of course, not to mention, your deepest feelings turning into lines of poems.
2005-10-14


Commentally Ill
ok

(moves on...... to the next poem)

;)
2005-10-01


Ray
With all due respect, at 23 you have truly experienced Love. It seems there was no lust here. Question is did your partner understood the break-up? Very good indeed. Much respect.
2005-09-30