An entry to my own erotic love challenge. It is based on the Picture in my exhibition called The Eve Of St Agnes by Millais


In The Cold Moonlight by M.A.Meddings

In the cold Moonlight
I see you standing before
My bed
Vulnerable 
Your long chestnut hair
Flowing and lightly touching
The smooth silken skin
Of your shoulders
Your impertinant nipples
Pressed hard against
The soft cloth of your bodice
And all for the muted
Desire in you
Retiscent
In your virgin shyness 
Fearful of your heart
Afraid of this urge
To be come a woman
Needing my gentle caring
And I In erectile glory
Beckon you to my love nest
And the warmth of my love 

 

  

 





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-23 at 08:09

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Zoya Zaidi
so,well done!
Mike! I think you are at your erotic best!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-10-23


Kathy Lockhart
soft, smooth, enticing, poetry. It has a smoldering sensuality that wraps itself around and through this poem.
2006-10-23


penfold18
An erotic and also an enchanting piece of poetry Mike.
2006-10-23



Being St Agnes Eve in january, I'm sure she will hasten to the warmth of him, as soon as she comes out of all those clothes. Subtly erotic and well done, hero!
2006-10-23