3 4 5 Angela format  mood


Almost night by M.A.Meddings

Darkness reigns 
In heartache games
Is it almost night?





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-10-24 at 11:23

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Lourdes
so silent , this poem .. but haunting . You are a very skilled writer sir .
2006-10-24


Audrey Barber
No not yet, Heartaches go on even in the night

Again takes only you to do this
2006-10-24



Sad, but beautifully expressed, hero! Let's light a candle!
2006-10-24


Kathy Lockhart
Wow it is amazing what these three lines can do. This made me sad. It just says so much and leaves the mind whirling with thoughts. Very nicely done.
2006-10-24


BlueyedSoul
excellent form, haunting words
~Blue
2006-10-24


gills
Never knew that words could move me so! I like the way u write :)
2006-10-24